J. Krue Review ★★★☆☆

Welcome to J. Krue. No, not the clothing store, but the new, pop-up, supposedly trendy café situated on 123 Hanley Road.

As you walk into the restaurant, you are greeted warmly and left to find your table on your own with your companions. The clean and modern atmosphere of J. Krue allows you to eat your food in natural light, but it needed more of an upbeat feel in order to be so called “trendy”. There was no music, and the server brought green paper menus with a selection of ten items and an indicator of a $5 credit, leaving almost no selection. The wait for water was a bit elongated and could have been cut in half. I was left parched towards the end of my meal because there were refills offered at this restaurant, leading me to believe that they are limited on water.

Upon debating which items to purchase, I was surprised by the small and overpriced items, such as a single vanilla sugar cookie for $3. I targeted the seemingly least expensive, but still pricey, items on the menu, potato crisps for $1.50 and lightly-salted tortilla chips for $1.50. I was disturbed by the small amount of food I received on my paper plate. World class renowned chef Bobby Flay seemed to be selling a shorthand to the customers with overpriced items and a small amount after purchasing.

Although I was disappointed in the quantity and quality of the overpriced items in J. Krue, I was pleasantly surprised when I was offered two complimentary cutie oranges to cleanse my palate. Overall, I would not recommend this café if you are looking to save money or have a filling meal.

Krue is open Monday through Fridays from 7:30am to 2:30pm. Opened on December 10, 2018, I would say J. Krue needs some improvement, but I would award it with three out of five stars.

 

Lost Review ★★☆☆☆

A plane goes up in flames and tears apart, crashing into an unknown island with a mysterious and dangerous creature lurking around, will the remaining passengers survive?

After watching the pilot episode of Lost, a drama/action show, surrounding the suspenseful journeys of several characters after their plane crashes into an unknown island, I would not recommend watching if you are not a fan of jump scares and a suspenseful plot line.

The characters are a unique and interesting group of people. The characters portrayed an array of emotions to the audience throughout the pilot episode. The main characters are memorable and convey fear, bravery, and friendship. Kate played by Evangeline Lilly, is an Australian, brown-haired woman, shows her true loyalty and bravery through intimidating situations when she doesn’t leave Jack behind after they find the transceiver in the nose of the dismembered plane. Jack played by Matthew Fox, is a doctor that was aboard the plane where upon its crash, helps calm and mend injured people throughout the episode. Although the many characters showed good acting skills, the plot was confusing to follow and made me jump out of my seat.

My least favorite part about this show, making me not recommend it to people that are not fans of suspense and sci-fi, was the graphic and haunting scenes that had me jumping out of my seat. The use of blood and dead bodies in the show was overwhelming and gory, causing me to gag, cover my eyes, and want the show turned off. At the beginning, Jack wakes up in a business suit with a loud ringing in his ears and bloody face in the middle of a tropical rainforest. He painfully makes his way to the shrilling sound of screams and smoke curling into the blue sky, to find the plane set in flames and many people in need of medical attention. Not only are many people dead, one man strays too close to the still working engine and gets sucked in, causing the engine to explode and the man and others to die. Throughout the episode, the director, J.J. Abrams, makes the decision to play dramatic music in the background to build suspense and make the audience’s hearts beat faster.

The episode even ended on a gory and graphic note with the bloody pilot hanging overhead in the trees after being attacked by a mysterious, unknown creature inhabiting the island. Overall, I thought Lost was a gory, graphic, confusing, and suspenseful TV drama with good quality actors. I would, again, not recommend this show to people that are not a fan of suspense/horror TV shows. I would give the TV show, Lost, two out of five stars.

 

Review Writing Notes

  • Use strong verbs
    • use verbs in their strongest form, the simple present or past
    • stay in the active present or the active past, not the progressive or the passive
      • He runs
      • John caught the ball
    • avoid verb qualifiers
      • sort of
      • tend to
      • kind of
      • must have
      • seemed to
      • could have
  • Beware of adverbs
    • They can dilute the meaning of the verb or repeat it
  • Never use passive voice
    • The action is next to the person performing it, not the subject

 

  • Review Writing
    • Restaurant Review Writing
      • Best to write about new restaurants
      • Compare and contrast is key
      • Reviews should either encourage or discourage readers from visiting a new restaurant
      •  most professional reviewers will visit a restaurant at least twice before giving a review
      • Reviewers do this anonymously because they do not want to be treated differently
      • Include prices for the main menu
      • Discuss the atmosphere and service
      • In your conclusion, you should include the address, hours of operation, and whether a reservation is necessary
  • TV Show Review Writing
    • Best to write about new shows
    • Compare and contrast
    • Reviews should either encourage or discourage readers from tuning in
    • Most professional reviewers will watch the first episode and review based on that. Sometimes they may watch the first few
    • Be sure to discuss the main actors and director by name and what other work they have done prior to this show (RESEARCH)
    • Conclusion should include time, channel, and day the show airs
  • Movie/Play Review Writing
    • Same as tv show review writing
  • Music Review
    • Best to write about new album releases/artists
    • Compare and contrast
    • Encourage or discourage
    • comment on the tone/vibe of the music
    • Discuss specific songs
    • Discuss any songs that are currently playing on the radio
    • Discuss any songs that got looked over and talk about them as well
  • Product Review
    • Includes makeup, beauty products, snacks, hair stylers, headphones, shoes, technology (phones, etc.), cars, cameras, literally anything your audience typically uses or would be interested in trying
    • best to write about new products
    • compare and contrast is key. compare to things they are familiar with
    • reviews should either encourage or discourage
    • be specific about what you like about the product-smell, look of packaging, color, price, availability, affect, etc.
    • What you do not like
    • Price of product, link, specific name, where they can buy it for the cheapest price

Editorial: Excessive amounts of homework have negative effects

Around 56% of all students credited their stress to homework, according to a survey found by the Stanford Graduate School of Education. Students around the world are suffering from an incline in the amounts of stress they have. Excessive amounts of homework affect many aspects of a student’s life inside and outside of school, including their performance in the school itself. Homework is typically thought to be the key to success in school and improve performance drastically when in reality homework is unnecessary busy work and does not improve performance at all.

Excessive amounts of homework noticeably hurt students and their performance in the school environment. After a full day of sitting in class, students can become tired, causing them to not want to do their homework. As a result, the student’s performance goes downhill along with their grades, according to the Oxford Learning Centre.  Let’s live through a typical high-schoolers day. First, the student wakes up around 6:30, gets ready and attends around seven hours of school. Then, add potential after-school activities such as clubs, meetings, sports, and tutoring. When they finally arrive home, they face large sums of homework that typically take the rest of the night to complete. So, when do students have time to relax and rejuvenate for the next day of school? Going through a students’ daily busy life, we find that an excessive amount of homework leaves no time for rest and rejuvenation, bringing us to our next point.

Homework undermines students mental, physical, and social skills in and out of school. High-schoolers need around eight to nine hours of sleep per night to be healthy, according to a study conducted by the National Sleep Foundation. But, when hours of homework are assigned by teachers each night, sleep is the first thing to go. Without the recommended hours of sleep, adolescents can become plagued with a variety of mental and physical problems such as sleep deprivation, depression, stress, increased fat storage, and an increase in the risk of developing type two diabetes. Not only are the student’s mental and physical health put at risk, but their social skills are also lost. Parents notice that their children are no longer active in family life, missing out on routine activities, such as family dinners, movies, and chores. Why? Because their kids have no time in their schedule due to an insanely large amount of homework.

Many times the homework load is overlooked and piled onto students, not knowing that it causes loss of mental, physical, and social skills in everyday life. We always think of homework as the key to success and effective tools in school and in life. But, this point of view is severely wrong. Studies have shown that many students have unnecessary added stress through homework assignments, leading to a decrease in academic performance, mental and physical health, and social skills. Although many teachers and a handful of parents claim that students review and refresh what they learn in class with homework, improving their memorization skills about the topic, homework destroys needed skills and students’ enjoyment of school, therefore needs to be reduced. We need to lessen the number of homework teachers assign to students on a daily basis in order to help students succeed and thrive in and out of school. Homework is something that detriments a student’s desire to learn and diminishes a students’ mental and physical health and needs to be reduced and/or stopped in schools.

Editorial Writing Notes

  • Editorials
    • written by one member of the editorial board
    • discussion occurs before writing to ensure all opinions are shared
    • after writing, the editorial is critiqued and agreed on by all members of the editorial board
    • represents the views of the publication staff on a timely or impactful topic
  • Editorial Structure
    • 500-600 words
    • part 1: begins with an attention-grabbing lede (outrageous fact, question, scenario-hypothetical or real, depending on the subject)
    • part 2: dives into the problem and the real-world impact it has. gives facts and presents research on the issue.
    • part 3: concedes a point to the counter argument/ acknowledges why the problem exists
    • part 4: refutes the counter argument
    • part 5: the call to action. what should people do? who needs to change? what can I, as the reader, do to help?
  • Editorial Research
    • Google – careful with where you go (.gov, .come, .edu, .net)
      • avoid blogs
      • be mindful that .gov sites are obviously run by the government and may be bias
      • always be wary of sites. if they look old or haven’t been updated the’yre probably not very reliable
    • You can quote other publications, but try to find the information on your own or follow their links to the first source rather than quoting a secondary source
  • Possible Topics
    • What are some issues facing American citizens/ Ladue communities?
      • homework shouldn’t be a thing
      • guns
      • discrimination
      • obesity
      • free/reduced lunch
      • lack of sleep
      • bullying
      • climate change
      • government
      • diversity
      • eating disorders
      • finals

 

Hooray for Mike Yeo Being Gone

Mike Yeo has turned Saint Louis into one big, depressing losing streak.

If you walk down the street in downtown Saint Louis on a game day during the winter, you’d see a mass of blue and gold colors walking towards the Scottrade Center. When you walk into the Scottrade Center, I promise you that you will be hit with a wave of enthusiastic fans, all hungry for a win. This is the atmosphere of Saint Louis, the home of the Blues.

But lately, the fans have been let down and constantly disappointed. They have nothing to be excited about anymore, and it was all because of ex-head coach, Mike Yeo, who led the Blues to three out of four losses in a row being shut outs.

With the leadership of Yeo, the Blues had a scoreless streak of 142 minutes and 48 seconds, seven periods without scoring a goal. Many players and fans were outraged at the amount of time without scoring a goal.

With Yeo as head coach, things were looking dull and not good for the Blues. The Predators, the number one team in the central division beat the St. Louis blues with a score of 4-1, with the Blues still under the bad guidance of head coach Mike Yeo. When Yeo was fired 90 minutes after losing another game with the Blues, fans and players hoped that the Blues season would look up to a brighter and better future on the ice, and we got what we asked for. The Blues agreed to fire Yeo and hire the Saint Louis Blues assistant coach to step in as a part-time head coach for the team while they were looking for a permanent solution.

On November 23, 2018, with Berube as the interim head coach, the tables turned for the Blues at their rematch against the Nashville Predators, the number one team in the Central division. The Blues and fans celebrated on the ice and in the stands as the game ended with the Blues breaking the losing streak with a score of 6-2, and it’s all because we got rid of Mike Yeo as head coach of the St. Louis Blues.

With the high hopes set in place for the Blues since Yeo is out of office, many people hope to find a better head coach to replace Berube as interim coach.

In my personal opinion, Mike Yeo brought St. Louis and its beloved hockey team down and into a spiral of bad vibes and losing streaks, but the Blues and its fans found a solution by firing Yeo. Once again, the season is looking up and will hopefully bring the Blues position in the central division instead of being placed seventh in the rankings, behind our rivals, the Chicago Blackhawks.

The Blues will see a brighter future and an increase in wins with Berube as interim coach and an eventually a new, more permanent head coach. Shoving Mike Yeo out of the doors of the Scottrade Center was the best decision the St. Louis Blues have made so far in the season.

Liu’s First Ace

Freshman, Sophia Liu hears her name called during tennis tryouts and takes a deep breath. Ridden with nerves, she opens the gate to the tennis courts and steps out for her match. The sun beats down, causing sweat to brim on her forehead as she smiles at her opponent. She plays an intense match and after winning, excitedly tells the coach her score. Then she hears the news that she made it onto the varsity tennis team, and she would be the only freshman.

Sophia Liu has been playing tennis for over four years and that commitment and love for the sport has changed her life and allowed her to befriend girls that she would typically not. Many people don’t make a varsity sport team their first year in high school, but Liu’s dedication to practicing and showing her skills opened the varsity door for her. When Coach Junker told Liu that she would be on the varsity team as the only freshman, Liu experienced a feeling many freshman will not.

“It was really cool because I would be playing tennis with these girls and it felt really awesome because they seemed like really nice people,” said Liu.

Liu felt right at home on the varsity team with Coach Junker, the girls, and her parents support. The upperclassmen and other older girls on the team never made Liu feel uncomfortable or out of place, but instead made the team feel like a second home.

“I think seven out of the ten players were new, so we were all new to the scene. I was never really excluded or anything,” said Liu.

Amongst the ‘homey feeling’ of the team, Liu still had freshman duties that she had to carry out alone. Being the only freshman on varsity had many pros, but had a few cons. Liu was assigned special tasks designed for freshman before and after every practice and match, but it never discouraged Liu from feeling at home on the team.

“Coach Junker, every time we finished a match, would have me get the scorecard balls and balls that people didn’t pick up,” said Liu.

Liu looked up to every girl on the team as if they were big sisters, but out of everyone she looked up to the team captains, juniors Schuyler Wolf and Shelei Pan, the most. As captains, Wolf and Pan led the team and took Liu under their wing and saw her as adding to the team’s game.

“Sophia was a big asset this year. She’s a freshman, so it’s her first year on the team, but she played number five singles and won a fair amount of her matches,” said Wolf.

Everyone on the team created many memories together and many with Liu. Liu expressed herself on and off the courts, creating lasting bonds with the older girls. The girls talk to Liu as if they are all the same age, and most of the time, forget the gap.

“She felt comfortable pretty quickly, comfortable enough to decide to practice her flute in my car one day,” said Pan.

With these lasting memories and laughs with the Ladue varsity tennis team, Liu is grateful that she had the experiences with this set of girls. The team bonding and friendly support on the team encouraged Liu throughout the season to push through and work hard. The girls taught Liu important life skills about determination, courage, and never giving up, allowing Liu to reminisce about her best days on the court and with the varsity team.

“My favorite part of the season was probably towards the end and we played districts and it was really fun to get the plaque and all. It was really nice to see all the girls giving it their all,” said Liu.

Column Writing

  • Opinated style of writing — a piece reflects ideas of a writer
  • Different kinds: lifestyle, advice, sports, humor, politics, religion, niche, etc.
  • Typically, columnists have a standing column and write material as often as the paper is published or on specific days of the week
  • Columnists should be experts in their topics so they stay informed and know what they are talking about
  • Humor Columnist
    • Dave Barry
    • Poke fun at day to day life, things accepted by society, funny scenarios that happened to them, etc.
    • Usually relates to a shared human experience
    • May comment on topics in the news or topics relevant to the community they are writing for
  • Lifestyle Columnist
    • Share parts of their lives with the reader who may not have experienced such a thing in their own life (living homeless, divorce, etc.)
    • The goal is to inspire or educate the reader (and sometimes just entertain)
    • Should relate to the reader or point to some universal idea humans can all understand
  • Political Columnist
    • Have the difficult job of making sense of politics and commenting in a logical way without driving away too many readers who may hold differing opinions
  • Sports Columnist
    • Writes about why games went the way they went, how the team will perform now that so-and-so is gone, which rookie is the one to snag up, etc.
    • Sports and scandals
    • Sports fanatic
  • Advice Columnist
    • Gives advice and sometimes answers questions from the readers
    • Dear ______,
    • Expert in topics they give advice about
  • Religion Columnist
    • Take a stab at tackling a very heated and debated topic
    • Some use humor, try to spread beliefs, make sense of traditions, etc.
  • Metro Columnist
    • Writes about what is going on within the local community
  • Niche Columnist
    • Customized columns for a specific audience
    • Gardening columns, teacher, motorcycle, tv shows, etc.
    • Personal experiences, recommendations, tricks, tips, and horror stories

Glass and Blair Ethics

Ethics have been called into question on the cases of Glass and Blair because they both wrote numerous ‘fake’ stories. Not only did they fabricate their stories and create quotes from ‘anonymous’ sources that were untrue. In the case of Glass, he went to a larger extent saying that he created websites and fake email addresses to cover up his lies. In all, he covered up his lies with even more lies every single time because he strove to be the best and have appealing articles and stories that would make the public interested, excited, and happy. In the case of Blair, he plagiarized other journalists articles word for word until one day he got caught. He would lie to his boss and the public saying that he even went to interview people when in reality he never showed up. He just used the stories, quotes, and words from someone else.